Dear Celestia?

No, I'm not doing a Twilight Sparkle letter! But I did learn something today. As I said in my first post, I'm hyper critical about everything I do, most of all, writing. Posted my first story on Fanfiction.net not too long ago and sent it to another site to see if they would accept it. Due to minor issues, they did not. I took it to heart at first, but reading more into it (as in my girlfriend explaining it to me!) I saw that it wasn't such a bad review, just constructive criticism. So I'll be making some changes :)